Would you Spend the Night in a Haunted Castle part 2
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Introduction
Introduction: This is based on a story I wrote long ago that you can find along with 31 others in my second published novel called “White Reindeer, Kudzu Monster, & Other Tales of Wonder” written under my pen name of DJ Lyons. As I prepare to perform this story at an October 15, 2011 function known as “Ghost Stories told around the Campfire,” I decided to transform it into poetic form for the enjoyment of my friends on Hubpages. Check the link at the bottom of the page should you like to view or purchase a copy of my book on Amazon. Or you can visit my website at http://askdjlyons.com in case you can get it for a cheaper price.
Naturally, when I perform it, I will tell it as a story rather than a poem. I just found it fun to solidify the story images in my mind that I soon will be performing along with several other ghostly tales.
Here is part 1 of the ghostly poem below.
Would you Spend the Night in a Haunted Castle part 1
Gwyn stared at Hugh
when his tale was done.
He finally said,
“Your tale was well-told.
However,
convinced me,
you did not do.
There is no such thing as a ghost!
So there!”
Hugh looked at Sion.
Sion looked at Hugh.
Hugh turned to Gwyn and challenged,
“Sion and I double-dog dare you
to spend the night
this very night
in a haunted castle
so you will see
the truth that lies
in me Gram’s ghostly tale.”
Gwyn challenged back,
“Why don’t you and Sion
spend the night
rather than I?’
Hugh said, “There is no need
for us brothers two
to spend the night
in this here castle
as no convincing
do either of us need.
We do believe in ghosts,
especially the Beaumaris ghost.
You are the one who needs convincing.”
Gwyn thought long.
He finally said,
“Me Mum is not expecting me home tonight
as she things I’m spending the night
at your house.
Since there still is food left
in our picnic lunch,
All right. I’ll do it.
I’ll spend the night.
Then in the morn,
I will convince you back,
there is no such thing as a ghost.”
Hugh only said, “You shall see.
We’ll see you in the morn.”
Close to four o’clock
Hugh and Sion exited the castle
through the gatehouse.
The gatekeeper seeing two walk out
had no memory that three had walked in.
Many, many people had toured
the castle that very day.
All he could think about
was how eager he was to have his tea
and warm delicious dinner
cooked just for him
by his loving, waiting wife.
As for Gwyn,
he carefully selected
one of the fifty guard rooms
to be his bedroom for that one night.
All he had for company
was the picnic lunch
and a watch that lit up
when you pushed
just the right button,
which he did, he did, he did,
as he watched the hours snail by
much slower than he would like.
A Guardroom inside Beaumaris Castle
Here is the long narrow window just the right size for a crossbow
5:00.
6:00.
7:00. He listened to the seagulls.
8:00. It’s dusk now.
9:00. It’s dark now.
10:00. My this night seems long.
11:00 I wish I was sleepy; however,
I must stay awake
until the witching hour of midnight.
After that, I can try to fall sleep
to make the rest of the night wing by.
My pillow and a blanket would be nice.
This stone bench lacks comfort
and warmth.
What did I get myself into?
As I’ve heard those American kids
say on American TV,
“Oh, Man!”
Finally, finally, it’s midnight.
Gwyn listens.
Gwyn looks.
Does he hear anything?
Does he see anything?
No, double no, triple no.
What a waste.
Now he must try to get by
until the morn.
At 12:15,
everything changes.
Gwyn hears, he hears, yes, he hears,
footsteps,
marching footsteps,
coming down the stone corridor
slowly, slowly, in his direction.
Castle Corridor inside Beaumaris Castle
STEP – STEP – STEP – STEP.
PAUSE.
Gwyn recalls there are four steps
to get between
guard room one
and guard room two.
Three steps now he hears.
STEP – STEP – STEP.
PAUSE.
Gwyn realizes that whoever this is,
they are walking the three steps up
so they can use their eyes, their eyes
to peer around the wall for lurkers.
STEP- STEP – STEP.
PAUSE.
Gwyn knows that they must retrace
those same three steps
so they can reach the room’s exit.
Then on he’ll go
until he reaches the next guardroom
so he can repeat the same refrain.
Closer, and closer, these marching feet walk.
Gwyn’s heart beat double-time,
triple-time,
and faster yet than that
when the footsteps finally paused
right outside
the very guardroom
where Gwyn did indeed lurk.
STEP – STEP – STEP.
PAUSE.
That pause felt like it lasted
a hundred years.
Then in his panic,
young Gwyn thought,
“Ahhhh! I can’t see. I’m blind.”
Then he smiled a brief smile
at how silly he was being.
He had forgotten to open his eyes.
When he managed to pry
his eyes open wide,
what did young Gwyn see?
He saw a torch,
making his guard room
be much more than candle bright.
Holding the torch was a hand.
Attached to that hand,
was an arm.
Gwyn thought and then tried to deny,
“Could I see through that hand and arm?
That could not be.
Because if I could see
through a translucent hand and arm,
that must mean,
could it mean,
could it be true,
that there actually is such a thing
as a ghost, a ghost,
a really and truly ghost?”
Then the torch swung around
as the guard or archer
traversed the three steps back
to the guard room door.
Then he continued on his way,
to make a similar trek
in each of the remaining guard rooms
in the castle Beaumaris.
Gwyn determined that if this was a ghost,
he must know for sure.
He planned to wait the twenty minutes
until the archer returned to make his rounds
in this particular corridor.
This time, his eyes would be open wide
so he could see
everything there was to see
about this haunting intruder.
Sure enough,
when the archer returned,
Gwyn’s eyes were wide.
“Yes, indeed,” he thought,
“I have been wrong, wrong, wrong
all these years, years, years.
There is indeed the reality
that ghosts do exist.
For here stands a ghost
right in front of me.”
After the archer backed out of his room,
Gwyn made ready to follow.
He was almost out the guardroom door,
when a second set of footsteps
did he hear.
These footsteps did scurry,
They did not march.
These footsteps were furtive,
like the footsteps of a spy
or a kid playing hide and go seek.
Those footsteps scurried by Gwyn’s location.
After they had gone by,
Gwyn carefully peeked out.
He saw the archer enter the tower staircase.
How did he know it was an archer?
The crossbow and spear were his two clues.
Following behind him
was a man
dressed in dark clothes,
like he was perhaps
one of the many angry villagers.
He too entered the tower staircase.
Gwyn determined to follow as well.
He waited until he could not be heard or seen,
then he entered the tower staircase as well.
He had no torch.
He had no light.
He did his best
to not let his feet slip
on the overly narrow stone steps.
He held onto the rope,
tight, tight, tight,
as he wound round and round
up the tower staircase
to the top of this very tower itself.
When Gwyn reached the top,
what did he see?
He saw the torch
hanging on the wall.
He saw the archer peering over the edge
of the stone wall,
into the crashing waves
of the Irish Sea.
Where was the other man?
Gwyn trained his eyes around.
Lurking in a corner
was the man crouched down,
preparing himself to spring.
Suddenly, spring he did.
Gwyn did not know
if he could be heard.
Nevertheless,
he called loud and quick,
“Look out!”
The villager held a dagger.
The archer turned,
his spear held at the horizontal.
it happened so quick.
It was truly an accident.
But the villager accidentally gutted himself
on the horizontal spear held by the archer.
Gywn gasped, “No!”
The archer gasped, “No!”
The villager sputtered out the words, “No!
It should have been you!”
Then he closed his eyes
and spoke no more
as blood began to pool
around his body now lying
on the cold stone floor.
The archer moaned, “Tom!
Oh, Tom!
I am so sorry, Tom!
I did not mean for you to die.”
Gwyn was in shock.
Seeing a man die
in front of his very eyes
felt very different
from what you see
on TV or Videogames.
It was horrible, horrible,
more than horrible!
He wished he could un-see
what he just saw.
But he could not.
Then the archer looked up
and actually seemed to see Gwyn.
The archer looked shocked.
He looked scared.
He stuttered,
“Are y-y-you a ghost?”
Gwyn looked puzzled.
He said,
“No, you are the ghost.”
The archer did not seem to understand.
The archer said,
“I did not mean to kill Tom.
It was an accident.”
Gwyn said, “You’re right.
It was an accident.
It’s not your fault that Tom is dead.”
The archer pulled out the spear.
He wiped the bloody spear
on some cloth from Tom’s pants.
Then he picked up the body,
cradling it in his arms,
and then dropped it down
into the Irish Sea.
Then the archer moaned,
“How am I going to tell his Mary
that her Tom is gone?
How am I going to face his wife?
I cannot!
I cannot face his wife
or his friends
and tell them this news.
I cannot. I cannot. I cannot!”
Then before Gwyn could think of words
to convince him otherwise,
the archer turned.
He ran.
He bounded over the stone wall
of the stone tower.
Then splash.
The crashing waves
of the Irish Sea
had one more obstacle
to crash against.
The archer was gone as well.
Gwyn was horrified doubly.
To see one man die was bad enough.
To witness two deaths in one night
was more than he could handle.
He ran to the stone wall
and carefully peered down.
All he saw was the Irish Sea.
No Tom. No archer.
Just the crashing Irish Sea.
As he blinked his tears away,
the Irish Sea was gone.
As he blinked more tears away,
the bloody spear was gone.
As he blinked further tears away,
the torch was gone.
Now Gwyn stood atop
that lonely haunted tower
all by himself
with nothing but the moon and stars
for company.
The best he could,
he found the rope
attached to the stone wall.
He spiraled his way down
the narrow tower steps.
He entered the stone corridor
and stepped his way
until he was once again
sitting on the stone bench
that also held the picnic basket.
As Gwyn did his best
to capture sleep,
he made up his mind.
“I wasn’t old enough
or wise enough
to know the right words
to bring comfort to that archer’s heart.
He needs to know
that Tom’s death
was not his fault.
I will think long and hard
through the rest of the summer.
I’ll get Hugh and Sion to think as well.
Maybe their Gram will know
the magic convincing words to say,
then I will return.
I don’t know if it’s possible,
but I need to prevent his untimely death
or at least give his heart some ease,
so he can stop his haunting
and rest in peace.
I don’t know if it’s possible,
but at least,
I have to try.”
Then Gwyn did his best
to sleep his way through
the rest of that lonely night
until morning.
Beaumaris Castle Anglesey North Wales
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Hi Debbie,
Long time no see... Interesting story, love to see this castle in person... voted up!
Best regards
John










Eiddwen 7 months ago
Wow Debbie,fanastic !!I read the first chapter but decided to comment after this one.
You really got into the spirit of that one -lol-
I have to admit that we haven't been to this castle on our trips,so another to visit in the not too distant future.
I vote up without a doubt here.
Take care my friend.
Eiddwen.